In Act 1, I loved the premise of this script, i.e., a guy is sent to retrieve his father's corpse.
In Act 2, I liked the characters, i.e., lost son, smart-ass flight attendant, relatives with grudges.
In Act 3, I became extremely irritated. First, there is a 7 page speech...by Hollie, Drew's mother.
"Hollie?! Why Hollie?" you ask.
Exactly my point. This is Drew's story.
Drew flies out to Elizabethtown, KY to deal with his father's family. He falls for the flight attendant, learns about his dad, gets over failures.
Hollie, on the other hand, breaks down and stays in Oregon.
She only appears in Kentucky around p. 105. And for that she gets a big "this is what I've learned" speech?
No no no.
Second, Act 3 read as if there was no end in sight.
Roger Ebert writes about his first viewing of the first cut: "It seemed to end, and end, and end."*
Reading it also felt that way.
WHAT I'VE LEARNED: Please - no new people, & wrap it up ASAP in Act 3.
Written & directed by Cameron Crowe
*Ebert saw the film twice. The first was longer and shown at the Toronto Film Festival. The final cut was much tighter, and had 18 min. trimmed.