[Quick Summary: George, the executor of his childhood best friend Fanshawe's literary estate, gets Fanshawe's work published, but isn't prepare for the success or the haunting that follows.]
First, this adaptation* is a complex psychological thriller that's creepy, bewildering, and mesmerizing, but most of all, inventive. I couldn't put it down. **
Second, I was impressed that this script feels like reading great literature, yet I never got lost or bogged down. ***
Here's the short version of the story:
- George and Fanshawe were childhood friends.
- Fanshawe was cooler than everyone and George admired him.
- They both wanted to be writers, but didn't, then lost touch after college.
- Twenty years later, George is working at a Big & Tall shop, writing in his free time.
- One day, George opens the door to a letter from Fanshawe's widow.
- Fanshawe wanted George to sort through his scribblings in a locked room and get them published if they were good. They were fantastic.
- Soon George is very busy handling offers, falling in love with his widow and child, appearing on tv promoting Fanshawe's writing.
- This is a nightmare for a good guy and aspiring writer like George.
- George is simultaneously haunted by his past envies of
Fanshawe, the present sticky situation, or his hope for a future with
Fanshawe's widow.
It's complicated, right? So why didn't I get lost?? I think it's because the writer understood the key role that subtext plays in psychological thrillers.
He structured the scenes so that we question George's mental judgment, i.e., whether he's reacting to the past/present/future, and returns to it regularly.
For example, in the scene below:
- Stuart, an editor and acquaintance, is entranced by Fanshawe's work.
- Stuart wants to publish. George agrees.
- Fanshawe died in fiery car accident.
- Two of the great mysteries of the story is WHY did Fanshawe leave all the responsibility to George, and what about George's hopes?
- Note that writer uses Stuart's questions to poke into the past, present, and future.
- Note how we circle back to an unspoken fear (George will not get published) and ends with a "ouch!" to his ego.
- Also note the SPEED of the emotional pacing. It's a roller coaster ride that circles back to the competition between George and Fanshawe.
INT. GEORGE'S APARTMENT - EVENING
...STUART: Pity.
GEORGE: Yeah.
STUART: I mean, that he isn't around. I'd love to be able to work with him. A few little nips and tucks -- you know.
GEORGE: That's just editor's pride. You can't look at a manuscript without wanting to take a red pencil to it. I'm sure he wouldn't change a word.
STUART: Hmm, you may be right. But don't take it to heart -- we can't all be prodigies
Suddenly, Stuart looks slyly at George.
STUART: Where is he?
GEORGE: Why d'you mean?
STUART: Is he shy, your boy? Is it some Pynchon thing we've got here? You're not just fronting for him, are ya?
GEORGE: Listen, if he was still around, believe me, I'd tell him to do his own dirty work.
Stuart just smiles. Does he really think George is toying with him? Or is he toying with George?
STUART: How's it feel?
George raises his eyebrows questioningly.
STUART: Discovering a new American master.
Stuart is needling him. George refuses to rise to the bait.
GEORGE: When do you think you'll have an answer.
STUART: Oh, I already have: we're publishing it. (at the door) Chin up. Might not be as bad as you think.
GEORGE: What?
STUART: Reflected glory.
Stuart leaves. George pondering.
WHAT I'VE LEARNED: Those two words ("reflected glory") made me realize the power of subtext in this script.
It's so much more layered and powerful than "you're not good enough" and speaks to how beautifully constructed this psychological trap is.
The Locked Room (unproduced 3/9/01 draft)
Based on the novel by Paul Auster
by Lem Dobbs
* It's adapted from The New York Trilogy (1987), by Paul Auster, which is three interconnected detective stories ("City of Glass," "Ghosts," and "The Locked Room").
**I have not read the book. Several book reviewers on Goodreads either loved it or hated it. I can understand why. I also felt frustrated that answers weren't readily available at times reading the script.
***Purely as a side note, I did get creeped out by the psychological suspense and was glad I read it in the day time.