[Quick Summary: Richard Williams has a unlikely plan for his two daughters, Venus and Serena, to become tennis champions.]
This is a well-written sports biopic, though it wasn't new or cutting edge.
However, I did like how the writer used of backstory to confront a character, rather than the usual "information dump."
The best example is late in the script (below):
- After Richard refuses to let Venus play in a tournament, his wife Orcene confronts him.
- Notice the backstory is used as evidence of quitting or not quitting. How many do you find? I found at least 8.
INT. WILLIAMS' HOME (FLORIDA) - MOMENTS LATER
...ORACENE: ...There would be no dream if it wasn't for me. I carried those girls, inside me and on my back. And I carried you too. I worked two shifts putting food on our table. (#1) That open stance stroke -- you got that from me! (#2) I fixed Serena's serve when you kept messing it up! (#3)
RICHARD: When you what?
ORACENE: Yeah, that's right. I fixed that toss you messed up. I've been here dreaming and believing the whole time, just like you. You just don't want to see me.
RICHARD: Whatchu want? A thank-you?
ORACENE: That's all right Richard. I don't need your thank you. Unlike you, I don't need the world to tell me I'm great.
At that, Richard starts to walk off.
ORACENE: That's right. Go ahead. Walk away. You are good at that. That's what you do, right? When things get hard, you just quit. Like you did with your cement business (#4) and your cleaning company. (#5) And all your other kids. (#6)
RICHARD: Oh, you got something you need to get off your chest? Well don't let God stop you. Say what you wanna say.
ORACENE: I just said it! You don't think I remember your son showing up in his red Nissan truck and knock on our door, and all you had to say was, 'Look, it's my son. He found me' (#7)-- or when your other kids came after. (#8) See, another woman would have left, but I stayed 'cause I don't quit. You're the one who leaves...
WHAT I'VE LEARNED: I really liked how the writer used the backstory with a defined purpose, i.e., to show the long family history with quitting/not quitting.
King Richard (2021)(final)
by Zach Baylin
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