TWO THINGS THIS SCRIPT DOES WELL:
1) RISING TENSION. This script was not super-fun to read, but it read smoothly. I particularly liked the continued rise in tension until the end.
2) INTERCUT A + INTERCUT B = COMPARE & CONTRAST
This script intercuts two simultaneous events (A, B) which makes the audience compare and contrast two opposing views.
In the scene below:
- Scene A: Jerome Turner, 90 y.o. black man, speaks to the Black Student Union about a public lynching of his friend.
- Scene B: Devin Davis, Grand Master of the Klan, initiates undercover cop Flip.
- Notice the intercutting of Turner and Davis makes the audience think about the cause and effect:
- past vs. present = We see that the present is still perpetuating past behaviors.
- pain vs. 'glory' = We see how that pain will continue because of these new members.
- new ideas vs. old ideas = Patrice and friends want a new world. Klan wants the old.
CLOSE - JEROME TURNER
JEROME TURNER: I was working at the Shoe Shine Parlor. After the verdict, a Mob grabbed Jesse, wrapped a Chain around his Neck and dragged him out the Court House.
CLOSE - 3 SHOT - PATRICE, ODETTA, HAKEEM
CLOSE - JEROME TURNER
JEROME TURNER: I knew I had to hide.
INT. PRIVATE ROOM - STEAKHOUSE - DAY
DEVIN DAVIS: Ron Stallworth. Are you a White, Non-Jewish American Citizen?
Flip is breathing hard.
FLIP: Yes.
DEVIN DAVIS:Yes, what?
FLIP: I am a White, Non-Jewish American Citizen.
INT. FREEDOM HOUSE - DAY
CLOSE - PATRICE
Tears rolls down her face.
JEROME TURNER (V.O.): The Attic of the Parlor had a Small Window and I watched below as The Mob marched Jesse along Stabbing and Beating him. Finally, they held Jesse down and cut his Testicles off in Front of City Hall.
CLOSE - JEROME TURNER
JEROME TURNER (V.O.): The Police and city Officials were out there just watching like it was a 4th of July Parade.
INT. PRIVATE ROOM - STEAKHOUSE - DAY
Davis looks into Flip's Eyes. Flip returns The Stare.
DEVIN DAVIS: Are you in favor of a White Man's Government in this Country?"
WHAT I'VE LEARNED: I liked the deliberate intercutting of A and B to assist the audience in comparing and contrasting, in cause and effect.
It's not just a fancy technique for show.
BlacKkKlansman (2018)
by Charlie Wachtel & David Rabinowitz and Kevin Willmott & Spike Lee
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