[Quick Summary: After being rescued at sea and brought to a mysterious island, a lawyer (Prendick) discovers his host Dr. Moreau is experimenting on animals.]
Writer Walon Green has quite a breadth and scope of his writing. He uses genres as tools for his stories, but is not dictated by them.
For example, this script is a mix of sci-fiction, horror, and psychological thriller. However, it is still very accessible to someone picking it up for the first time.
How did he make it easy and interesting for the reader?
a) He made an unfamiliar situation recognizable for the reader; yet
b) Uses genre tropes to heighten the impact of the scene.
For example, this scene below:
- Prendick, the protagonist, spends his first night on Dr. Moreau's spooky island.
- Prendick is locked into his room at night "for his own safety" and wakes up. This is familiar sensation to many travelers.
- Then, however, Green uses genre elements to heighten this situation: sci-fi (what kind of child is born?), horror (screams in the night), thriller (danger to protagonist?)
INT. THE GUEST ROOM - NIGHT
...We see the following (PRENDICK'S P.O.V.) as though through a nightmare:
Prendick is alone, deep in sleep, through which he can hear the SCREAMS, now at an unbearable pitch.
INT. THE WOMB - NIGHT
An unborn CHILD pushes through the red-veined darkness, eyes still closed, squeezed shut as if anguished by this transition from one world to another.
In the darkness of the womb the child twists and SCREAMS.
CUT TO:
INT. THE GUEST ROOM - NIGHT
Prendick sits bolt upright on the bed. It takes him only a moment to realize that the pitch of the cries has changed. They no longer sound like the howling of man nor beast, but have become instead the screams of a child in pain.
Prendick turns and goes to the door a bit unsteadily. He tries it. Still locked.
WHAT I'VE LEARNED: It's easy to assume everyone knows the genre tropes as well as you, writer. So do NOT assume.
Make sure you have the basics so the reader knows what is happening (cake), then heighten with the genre tropes (frosting).
The Island of Dr. Moreau (1996)(4/26/94 draft)
by Richard Stanley & Michael Berr
Revised by Walon Green
Based upon the novel by H. G. Wells
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